Прошу проверить перевод -2 gen.

[finance]

уважаемые коллеги
вы извините за мою наглость- в связи с тем, что никогда не жил и не выезжал в англоязычную страну, мнесложно переводить кое-какие места на анг

Принимающая сторона несет ответственность за обеспечение со-провождения посетителя в течение всего визита как в рабочее так и во внерабочее время с момента получения временного пропуска до его сдачи у стола регистрации и выхода из Головного Офиса

мой вариант
Receiving party is responsible for ensuring visitors being accompanied during visit within and outside business hours from moment of receiving temporary badge until it is returned at registration desk and leaving Headquarter

[Aiduza]

Head Office.

[Wolverine]

хоть артикли кое-где расставьте
the moment, например.
+ еще раз перепишите, фразеология сильно хромает.
хотя смысл понятен.

[Clewlow]

Hosting party is to ensure that the visitors are being accompanied for the duration of their stay within and outside business hours, from the moment they are issued with the visitor's badge and until its return at the Head Office reception desk.

[sivantsov]

а почему "со-провождения" ? ) И запятых не хватает )

[Эдельвейс05]

Посетитель на каком мероприятии? Выставки, презентации, пресс-конференции? В словарях везде host party.

Может, arrangements for accompanying visitors are the responsibility of

before giving it back

[kateri]

The host party is responsible to ensure that the visitors are accompanied throughout their visit both during office and off hours from the moment a temporary badge obtained and until it returned to the reception desk and the visitors exited Headquarter.
Aiduza, Headquarter is must! here

[Rami88]

Wolverine +1
Clewlow +1
Also consider: SHALL be responsible

[Эдельвейс05]

is responsible to ensure ??

be responsible to somebody/for doing something

[Rami88]

Поработаю немного trtrtr'ом:) (его всё равно что-то давно не видно)
https://www.google.ru/?gws_rd=ssl#q="is+responsible+to+ensure"+co.uk&newwindow=1&start=0

[Эдельвейс05]

Ок, спасибо за работу. ))

[Rami88]

Обращайтесь))

[Clewlow]

kateri, IS obtained. Headquarter is not A must unless you know more than I do about this company from the given context. with all due respect, that is.

[mikhailS]

2 Clewlow,
Имхо:
*all visitors are accompanied
*issued a visitor badge
*and until they return it (the badge) to reception when leaving Head Office Premises.

[tt2]

только варианты, не противоречущие вашим:
Host (country)
is mandated to ensure
escort
during and outside of office hours
pass
Headquarters/Head Office

[Clewlow]

thanks mikhailS, I agree.