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link 17.10.2005 12:57 |
Subject: другой участник создания спектакля- аргентинец ривет. ваши идеи по поводу перевода следущего отривкаМы встретились с Александром снова, после долгого перерыва весной 2005 met Alexandre after a long time again in spring 2005 in the German city |
we met Alexander again - after a long gap - in spring 2005 in the German city of Wiesbaden, where the State Theatre was preparing for the staging of La Dame Aux Camelias ballet. Vasiliev was invited there to decorate the stage. Curiously, the stage manager was Flemish, one of the creative assistants was an Argentine (Argentinian), and the ballet (spectacle) itself involved some Russian and Kazakh dancers along with the Germans обратите внимание на написание Kazakh, подучите английский и оставьте в сторонке восклицательные знаки, они не делают пассаж грамотнее или яснее... )) |
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link 17.10.2005 13:39 |
Skoree ne "we met", a "I" met, eto ja mestoimenee sluchajno propustila. "after a long gap" zvuchit na moj vzglajd slishkom formalno tak zhe kak "was preparing for the staging" - srazu dva "ing"ovyh okonchanija Izvinite Mo.Ne pretenduja na zvanie velikogo perevodchika zamechu, chto po-moemu Vi ottalkivaetes ot tehnicheskih Tekstov otsjuda neskolko formalnij "ne-hudozhestvennij" jazik, esli mozhno tak skazat. |
Katyafiona: спасибо, говорите? ну нет, да бросьте Вы, зачем такие формальности между давними друзьями. Мне бы критики, да побольше. Знаю, знаю - напрасно я влезла Вас поправлять - оставляйте свой вариант, он несомненно лучше )) Успехов Вам |
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link 18.10.2005 1:11 |
just a few thoughts: 1. I would say “in THE spring OF 2005” 2. Интересно, что – Interestingly enough/It is interesting that/curiously enough/odd enough... 3. другой участник создания спектакля - another member of the production team/crew 4. along with the Germans, the cast (also) included Russian and Kazakh dancers 5. I would not use “cast" in “ the cast was really international”, I would say “the CREW was really international” or “it was a truly international crew”, because cast means actors or dancers involved in the production. It does not include the director or the costume & set designer who were mentioned in the previous sentence. |
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