Trap into ropes gen.

[teammember2]

Trap into ropes, falls, entanglement of personnel=Запутывание в тросах, падения, запутывание персонала ??
мой вариант перевод нормально по русски разговаривать?

[muzungu]

I'm telling you, this is not the way to do it. You write abrupt phrases and leave too much room for guesswork.
My impression is that you are not in good command of Russian and what you are doing now is an attempt to verify somebody else's translation. I can't judge whether the translation is good or not good, cause I'm not up to speed with this trade. Sorry.