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 interp30

link 18.10.2011 6:57 
Subject: плохо то, что gen.
Коллеги, подскажите, как написать:
плохо то, что

Контекст:
Меня не будет на работе, я отпрашивался у босса.
Плохо то, что и Светы не будет на заводе.

Заранее спасибо.

 Serge1985

link 18.10.2011 6:59 
I won't be present at work, have asked leave from the boss
Sveta won't be either. That's bad.

 Serge1985

link 18.10.2011 7:00 
или обязательно надо дословно?

 Alezhka

link 18.10.2011 7:00 
It's bad that ..

 Supa Traslata

link 18.10.2011 7:00 
What makes it even worse is that...

 interp30

link 18.10.2011 7:02 
Дословно не обязательно.
Главное, выкрутится.

Должен приехать иностранец, а директора не будет. Ладно бы директор, но и заместителя не будет. Вот как бы так мягко и уважительно, пишем.

 Serge1985

link 18.10.2011 7:03 
стиль официальный/полуофициальный/неформальный?

 interp30

link 18.10.2011 7:07 
полуофициальный/дружеский, все вместе

 Serge1985

link 18.10.2011 7:09 
А кто кому пишет сее послание?

Можно совсем по-простому (в виде записки или смс-ки)

Won't be in. Asked leave from Boss
Sveta won't be either. That's bad.

 Doodie

link 18.10.2011 7:10 
the trouble is

 interp30

link 18.10.2011 7:10 
Вот как-то так выходит:

I have a small request to you.
Could you please move your visit to the week from 31st of October.
I did not know about your intention to visit Kharkov brewery, I had asked a three days leave (October 24, 25 and 26) from Daniel.
It`s bad that next week Svetlana won't be either.
We understand that this is a very serious project and we would like to meet you and talk to you as your experience could help us to be better prepared to production.
Once again, I do apologize.
If I knew that you arrive, I would postpone my leave.

Замечания?

 silly.wizard

link 18.10.2011 7:53 
имхов тележка:

... to the week STARTING ...
... , SO I've asked FOR a three days leave ...
( What makes it even worse is that (+1) / Unfortunately, ) Svetlana won't be (here/there/present/available/...) next week either.
.... would like to meet WITH you ... prepared to production (что???)
If I knew that you WERE TO VISIT US, I would HAVE POSTPONED/RESCHEDULED my leave.

 _Ann_

link 18.10.2011 8:04 
мне каца, все эти bad & even worse здесь слегка неуместны - обычная просьба перенести визит же

 HarryWharton&Co

link 18.10.2011 8:08 
I won't be at work, I've asked the boss for some time off.
Unfortunately, Sveta won't be there either.

(I agree with Ann)

 Serge1985

link 18.10.2011 8:12 
чем проще, тем лучше
+1

 HarryWharton&Co

link 18.10.2011 8:19 
I have a small request to make of you. Would it be possible for you to reschedule your visit to the week beginning October 31? I wasn't aware that you were planning to visit Kharkov Brewery and I asked Daniel for three days off (October 24-26). Unfortunately, Svetlana won't be there either. We fully understand the importance of this project and would like to meet and talk to you as your expertise could help us improve production.
Once again, please accept my apologies. Had I known about your visit, I would not have applied for leave of absence.

 interp30

link 18.10.2011 8:33 
Спасибо всем большое!

 

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