Уважаемые, проверьте, пожалуйста, перевод предложения.

[orlowa.lera]

Солнце припекает, сосульки начинают таять, звенит капель, наступает оттепель - это все верные и долгожданные признаки того, что наступает весна.
Мой вариант:
The sun is hot, the icicles begin to melt, drops ring, a thaw has set in - it is all faithful and long-expected features that spring comes.
Очень не уверена касательно "звенит капель"...

[ozmikal]

The burning sun [a bit strange at the start of spring: how about 'warm sun'?], the melting icicles and the tinkling of their drops, the start of the thaw; these are the reliable and long-expected signs of the coming of spring.

[orlowa.lera]

Спасибо) Думаю warming sun будет правильней.

[ozmikal]

You're welcome. Not sure that the translation of долгожданные is best.
Choose a better version: http://www.multitran.ru/c/m/l1=2&l2=1&s=������������+

[orlowa.lera]

ok.

[Тимурыч]

It is getting warmer, you can hear the dripping sounds of icicles melting in the sun as the thaw sets in - these are true and long-awaited signs indicating that the spring is on the way.

[orlowa.lera]

Thank you for your help guys.

[ozmikal]

indicating that spring is on its way.

Unnecessary article...

and [;] is what we use in English to convey the meaning of the Russian [-]