Subject: об изготовлении 50% товара "с момента получения Покупателем уведомления от Продавца об изготовлении 50% товара в письменной форме, переданной по факсу, почте или электронной почте.""об изготовлении 50% товара " не знаю куда поставить, очень коряво получается. Может быть кто-нибудь поможет? |
Так Вы бы дали всё-таки свой вариант, пусть даже и "корявый" с Вашей т.з. А коллеги бы и поправили. |
The rest 70 % of the total invoice amount shall be paid by wire transfer within 20 days of receiving the written notice from the Seller sent by fax, mail or e-mail и вот куда про 50 % лучше вставить... |
рест я бы поменял на бэлэнс |
имхо notice... on 50% readiness of the goods... |
"Остальные 70% от общей суммы "... |
balance [] 1) a weighing device, generally consisting of a horizontal beam pivoted at its centre, from the ends of which two pans are suspended. The substance to be weighed is placed in one pan and known weights are placed in the other until the beam returns to the horizontal See also microbalance 2) an imagined device for events, actions, motives, etc., in relation to each other (esp in the phrases weigh in the balance, hang in the balance) 3) a state of equilibrium 4) something that brings about such a state 5) equilibrium of the body; steadiness to lose one's balance 6) emotional stability; calmness of mind 7) harmony in the parts of a whole balance in an artistic composition 8) the act of weighing factors, quantities, etc., against each other 9) the power to influence or control he held the balance of power 10) something that remains or is left let me have the balance of what you owe me 12) chemistry the state of a chemical equation in which the number, kind, electrical charges, etc., of the atoms on opposite sides are equal 13) a balancing movement 14) short for spring balance 15) - in the balance 16) - on balance 17) - strike a balance |
За неимением пока что ничего лучшего: within 20 days from receiving the Seller's written fax, mail or e-mail notice of the readiness of 50% of the goods for transfer |
The remaining 70 % of ... |
Спасибо всем |
written лучше поставить после fax, mail or e-mail и перед notice |
мож разбить? что-т по типу... Balance of [about] 70% of the goods' value is to be paid within 20 (calendar? working?) days from the date of receiving Seller's written notice confirming readiness of 50% of the goods. Such a notice is to be sent by fax, mail or email. about вставил только из чувства самосохранения ибо не знаю специфики продукции...:) |
balance+1 imho: |
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