Правильно ли изложено на английском?

[LiliO]

Please be informed that we have reviewed the documents uploaded into the VDR after sending you our previous e-mail, in particular, files placed into sections 2 and 4 and updated the table (see attached). We have also discovered that additional documents were also uploaded into sections ...

Спасибо!

[sledopyt]

Please be informed that -- можно смело опустить

We have reviewed the documents uploaded into the VDR FOLLOWING after sending you our previous e-mail. AFTER REVIEWING in particular, THE files placed into sections 2 and 4, WE HAVE and updated the table (see attached). We have also discovered that additional documents were also uploaded into sections (и что?) может сказать: We noticed that there are some additional document saved/uploaded in sections ? ...

[LiliO]

sledopyt, спасибо большое! Предложенный Вами вариант логичен. Вы меня просто спасли ...
P.S. Как тяжело быть недоучкой.. но, сама виновата...