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 Лоркин

link 19.03.2007 4:21 
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Этот стих я сама сичинила, если бы вам отправили такой стих, как бы отреогировал?

I am thinking of you
As I am alone without you
Just only have sweet memories of you
No wish anything to do
Besides a wish to see you
From the beginning I knew
That it was wrong to love you
But when I fall in love
So difficult it was
To withstand temptation of love
And now I know what true love is
And even know the cost of it
This love granted me with three happy nights
That knocked the bottom of my life
And left a piece of holiday in my heart
That I felt in that long hot summer night
I want so much to be blessed
And have in my life only the best
I tried all cures, but nothing helps
Because, for me you are the BEST!
And nobody is able to replace
Cause only you are the BEST!
OK my Dear, Let’s SMILE
Believe me, everything is fine
You might have guessed
That it was just a pretext
To write a letter to you
So amazing but nothing comes to mind
When I consider you as a friend of mine
Unbelievable!I don’t know even what to write.
May be it is better and right
Rather that to write
That I dream to have one more unforgettable night

Мне очень важны Ваши комментарии.

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link 19.03.2007 4:33 
Блин, такой длинный, пардон!

 Лоркин

link 19.03.2007 4:39 
Когда писала, почему то не обратила внимание на объем. А что не очень да?

 VVM

link 19.03.2007 6:16 
фразы такие как I'm thinking of you и Wrong to love you очень избитые))

 

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