нужен добрый Native! SOS

[yavrum]

есть ли на форуме добрый нейтив кто бы согласился проверить один листик текста (даже меньше :))переведенного на английский? хотелось бы быть уверенной в правильности текста именно с точки зрения англоговорящего.
правда очень надо!
моя благодарность не будет знать границ!

[Annabelle]

А что за текст?
У меня есть знакомый нейтив (американец), который мог бы его глянуть.
На когда вам это нужно?

[Nina79]

I'll do it.
what is the text about?

[Nina79]

I won't be having a busy day at work, so I will actually be quite glad to do it :)

[yavrum]

Спасибо вам всем ОГРОМНОЕ!!!! это реклама компании которая будет выпущена зарубежом, поэтому вот и не хочется лицом в грязь ударить.
Нужно до завтрашнего вечера.
смогу отправить вам текст где-то часа через два (жду пока поднесут его весь целиком).
еще раз СПАСИБО!!!!

[Annabelle]

мой мейл [e-mail]
жду :)

[Nina79]

[e-mail]

[Nina79]

yavrum

check your in-box

[Annabelle]

yavrum, проверяйте почту :))

[Nina79]

ok, you really need to check your mail if we are all telling you to do it.
Be a good girl now, and CHECK YOUR INBOX! :)

[Annabelle]

Сузан, давайте хором, вдруг отзовется? :))

[Nina79]

i sent you 3 different versions.
a simple "thank you" would have been nice

[серёга]

видимо, ее благодарность уже не знает границ, как и было сказано...))

[Annabelle]

Сузи, целых 3????
Мой нейтив 1 только присал :))
Но я думаю, что этого хватит :))

[Nina79]

oh, yes, I am sure it's enough.
I was going to only send one. Then I decided on two. The I decided to make a 3rd one - a more spicy version :)
Obvioulsy I had a lot of time this morning and didn't feel like making paper frogs, so I used it to work on my own creative writing skills :)

[Annabelle]

How is your baby?

[Nina79]

she is OK. we had a night of screaming and horror last night. must be a tooth. other than that, she is doing great. she walks while hanging onto furniture. a bit early (she started when she was 6 and half months and is now 7 (as of yesturday) but hey, i'm glad she is an early mover!)

if you go to xanga.com and look for a user named SusshiBabyshi you can see her. I made a sit so that my family can see her. And no, it's not personal, so it's ok to post here. However there might be some embarassing photos of me. but all new moms have lots of those! :)

[Annabelle]

She is so funny :)))
She looks like your husband a lot!

[Nina79]

yeah she does.. but she is starting to look more like me which is nice:) her chin, eye shape and smile are all mine. it's the dark eyes and hair that make eveyone say she is his. plus, she has a little nose... not a potato like daddy :)

[Annabelle]

Later we can see like whom she will look :)))

[Nina79]

yes, we shall see. i guess she looks like both of us :))
glad you liked her

[Annabelle]

Your kid made me smile :))
I can't help smiling while looking at her :))

[Nina79]

that's how I feel. except last night... i jsut wanted to cry right along with her. poor thing :(

[Annabelle]

I can understand you! But you will overcome it, you are stong!

[Nina79]

i am sure we will be ok. we all got our teeth at some point (I hope we all did).

[Annabelle]

May be you won't believe me, but I'm having my teeth growing now :)))

[Nina79]

wisdom teeth? mine are, too (if that's what you meant).

[Annabelle]

Yes, that exactly what I mean :)))
It's so painful!
The are alreday growing for 2 years and this process still continues.

[Nina79]

yes, mine have been growing for years as well.
one is in. the other 3 always start and then receed and start again and recede and it's the pits. just the pits. so i feel ya.

[Nina79]

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[Annabelle]

I have the same!
So we are getting more and more wise every day :)))