jazz

[Helen_D]

Добрый вечер, огромная просьба, проверить и подкорректировать если есть недочеты в тексте, не очень-то хочется отправлять текст приглашения с ошибками.

Заранее благодарю.

The Title of Russia Honored Artist was awarded to Mr. X – jazz pianist and leader of “Jazz-Band” a month ago. However the musician had no choice to celebrate the significant event. And now…
«The rendezvous point should not be changed, because my colleagues and I, we are waiting for the celebration not only our friends but also those who love jazz music from the heart. That is why we are all need clear meeting point - jazz club “X”, comment the pianist.

И еше, подскажите как правильней написать Начало концерта: beginning или start?

[Nocturne]

Как по-русски звучит фраза "had no choice to celebrate"? Если я правильно понимаю, то не choice, а opportunity.
Не "we are all need", а we all need или we're all in the need for.

[Angi_S]

The Title of Russia Honored Artist was awarded to Mr. X – a jazz pianist and the leader of “Jazz-Band” - a month ago. However, the musician had no chance/opportunity to celebrate that significant event. And now…
«The rendezvous point should not be changed, because my colleagues and I expect to come to celebration not only our friends but everyone who loves jazz music from the heart/everyone who heartly/sincerely loves jazz music. That is why we are all in need of a clear meeting point/place, and it is jazz club “X”, comments the pianist.

this is what i suggest

[D-50]

""we are waiting for the celebration not only our friends but also those who love jazz music from the heart""

this sentence is kinda nebulous. You mean that not only your friends are expected to come over there but.....??

And please don't call it "jazz music", just "jazz" would do.