делить или не делить gen.

[azor_azor]

Уважаемые форумчане, подскажите, пожалуйста, нужно ли разбивать предложение на два или оставить все в одном:

В приложенном файле - план организации работ с проведённой оценкой риска на сварочно-монтажные работы по дренажной линии на участке трубопровода между клапанами RG-344 и RG-345 для Вашего рассмотрения и комментариев.

Перевод:

In the attached file there is a plan of organization of works with risk assessment for welding and installation works on a drain line at pipeline section between RG-344 and RG-345 valves. Please, consider and make your comments.

[Liquid_Sun]

Лучше поделить на 3:
Reference to the attached file./Please find attached.
The plan of welding and assembly works within the drainline run between RG-344 and RG-345 valve including the work risk assessment.

[smartasset]

attached is a plan ....... ....... ....... ....... , for your review [and comments]

[azor_azor]

спасибо большое!

[gni153]

Не делите
In the attached file there is a plan of organization of works with risk assessment for welding and installation works on a drain line at pipeline section between RG-344 and RG-345 valves for your consideration and comments.