Ошибка в предложении?

[oilgirl]

Где тут ошибка?
As my working experience , I have been employed every summer during three years as Field production operator assistant in Samotlorneftegaz OJSC.

[SirReal]

For the last three summers I have been employed as Field production operator assistant at OAO Samotlorneftegaz.

[silly.wizard]

+ As for my working experience, ... .... at .....

[askandy]

Если надо найти ошибку...

As my working experience = As FOR my working experience / As FAR AS my working experience IS CONCERNED

[oilgirl]

Спасибо всем.
а в данном предложении :
Was in national team of volleyball Ural State Oil and Gas University.

[SirReal]

Как же команда университета может быть национальной сборной?

[oilgirl]

мне надо указать что : Состоял в сборной команде университета по волейболу.

[oilgirl]

в английском я не силен , только начинаю изучать

[SirReal]

On the volleyball team of Ural State Oil and Gas University

[oilgirl]

Was on the volleyball team of ural state oil and gas university?
не?

[vasya_krolikov]

+played volleyball for the Urals Oil&Gas University

[oilgirl]

Так как правильнее то будет перевести данное предложение:
"Состоял в сборной команде университета по волейболу"
нужно в резюме.

1)On the volleyball team of Ural State Oil and Gas University
2)played volleyball for the Urals Oil&Gas University
3)was a member of the Ural University volleyball team
или по-другому?

[sledopyt]

Played for the Ural ... University volleyball team.

As for my work experience, I worked, for three summers (in a row), as a Field Production Operator Assistant at Samotlorneftegaz OJSC.

[Tamerlane]

three consecutive summers

The program is completed over three consecutive summers.
http://www.hsph.harvard.edu/academics/master-of-public-health-program/program/summer-only-mph/index.html

played on the Ural University volleyball team

His son, Mitch, played on the Stanford University basketball team from 2005 to 2008.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Johnson_(basketball)

was on the Ural University volleyball team

General Motors CEO, Rick Wagoner, who stands 6’4”,
was on the Duke University basketball team and was said to have dreamed of becoming a pro.
http://ac360.blogs.cnn.com/2008/12/04/the-big-3-1-and-the-b-word/