финансы. Друзья, подкорректируете

[Romex]

Друзья, подкорректируете

Цель работы изанализировать главные банковские риски и причины потерь связанные с данными рисками, чтобы понять применение показателя достаточности капитала в жизни. Oбъём бакалаврской работы без приложений 60 страниц.

Моя версия:
The goal of Bechelor's thesis is to analyze the main banking risks and the reasons of losses connected with banking risks to understand application of Capital adequacy ratio in life. Total amount of Bechelor's thesis without appendices is 81 pages.

[Alex16]

the reasons of losses = reasons for losses

...in order to understand the practical implementation of the Capital Adequacy Ratio.

[123:]

Хреновая версия - 60 не равно 81...

Oбъём бакалаврской работы без приложений 60 страниц
Total amount of Bechelor's thesis without appendices is 81 pages.

[Romex]

Alex16 Thanks, по взрослому звучит теперь.

[inc]

My attempt:

The goal of the [this?] Bachelor’s thesis is to analyze the main banking risks and the reasons for losses associated with banking risks in order to understand application of the capital adequacy ratio in practice. Total length of Bachelor’s thesis without appendices is 81 pages.

(Bachelor's was spelled incorrectly. The rest are stylistic changes that sound better to me as a native English speaker - take 'em or leave 'em. :) )

[Podruga_1978]

Имхо, understand лучше заменить на investigate or examine

[natrix_reloaded]

У меня вопрос по оригиналу:
///Цель работы изанализировать ///- это как?
изучить? проанализировать? первое и второе вместе?

[inc]

Just had an idea.. it sounds weird to repeat the "banking risks" phrase..

Why not something like:

"... banking risks and the losses associated with them..."
"... banking risks and their associated losses..."

?

[Romex]

Thanks. Last advice is the BEST!!!!