recommendation - check it, plz

[Feld]

Пожалуйста, проверьте правильность рекомендательного письма (там может быть много ошибок, у меня английский не первый язык). Спасибо!

To whom it may concern,

………………………. represented by members of Human Resources department co-operated with Anna in the project ……….., and when Anna carried out an international project “ …………………..” We are grateful Anna for performed work. Anna organized the joint event - the Master class for youth within the project Skills Matter. She prepared handouts very qualitatively, ensured attendance of 70 students (what was a great result for that project) . She also arranged (in was gratis for us) a hall in ……………………. Academy with all necessary equipment for presentation. We appreciate her skills and consider the organization of that event as very well. In her diploma-work connected with that project Anna performed both theoretical and practical tasks. She was entrusted with a task to analyse the market of ……………………….. and to conduct a research how employees of our company use their working time. Anna brilliantly managed assigned tasks, what was also special mentioned by our Austrian colleagues, particularly by Leader of the IT/IS department. She approached the project with all responsibility, she managed to do everything in time, to make precise calculations, to analyze and to interpret the results correct. We consider that Anna can later on successfully cope with challenging tasks, and are very pleased to recommend her for admission to international educational program.

[KN]

А русский вариант есть?

[Feld]

Русского варианта нет. Это не перевод, а первоисточник. Главное, чтоб по английски красиво звучало, можно немного менять, важет только смысл. Спасибо!

[Shumov]

Не переписывая, а лишь правя....

To whom it may concern,

………………………. represented by members of Human Resources department co-operated WORKED with Anna in ON the project ……and ….. PROJECTS, and when Anna carried out an international project “ …………………..”. We are grateful TO Anna for performed HER work; she Anna organized the joint event the Youth Master Class for youthwithin the project as part of the Skills Matter project, . She prepared HIGH-QUALITY handouts very qualitatively, and ensured an exellent attendance of 70 students (what was a great result for that project) . Anna She also arranged (free of charge!)(in was gratis for us) a hall in A VENUE AT ……………………. Academy with AND all THE equipment necessary for THE/OUR (?) presentation. We appreciate her skills and consider the organization of that event as very well. The event went very well, which was largely due to Anna's great organisational skills. In her diploma-work connected with ON that project....

Устал.....))).... может кто-то еще подтянется....

[Feld]

Вот это да...! Спасибо!
Пожалуйста, помогите домучить этот текст до конца!!!

[Feld]

Ребята, пожалуйста, не бросайте меня!!! ПОМОГИТЕ!!!

[Shumov]

Ох, уж эти ребята.... Берите, уносите, не благодарите....

Anna's diploma-work on that project involved both theoretical and practical tasks. She was asked to analyse the ……………………….. market and to conduct a research on how our employees use their working time. It was noted by our Austrian colleagues, and by the IT/IS department leader in particular, that Anna managed this task brilliantly. She adopted a professional approach to this project, managed to do everything on time, her calculations were precise, and her analysis and interpretation were correct. We believe that Anna can successfully perform challenging tasks and are very pleased to recommend her for admission to this (?)educational program.

[Feld]

Ну вы мне просто жизнь спасли :)))