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Subject: Критика статьи Здравствуйте, мне нужно получить максимальную критику по нижеследующим 2м текстам. Принимаются все замечаения, особенно орфография и стилистика.
Заранее спасибо всем, кто поможет!The modern salmonellosis is characterized by
weight, propensity to wavy and long current, high
percent of lethal outcomes, especially among
children of early age. The purpose of the research:
to defi ne value of the quantitative maintenance
of vitamins В2 and В3 in blood of children in
formation of the immune answer of children with a
salmonellosis. Materials and methods: research was
conducted in the Regional child's infectious clinical
hospital. Under supervision there were 70 patients at
the age of 1–3 years, соntrol group – 15 children of
that age. Results of the research: the salmonellosis
was registered more often in children at the age of
1 month – 1 year. There prevailed middle weight
forms of the disease – 60 (84,5 %) children. At
studying activity of neutrophil in the nitro-blue
tetrazoly (NBT) test its increase in comparison with
parameters in healthy children was established.
Additional stimulation neutrophil to blood led to
sharp reduction in activity of neutrophilic granular
leukocyte in the NBT – test. In the research of
antibodies A, M, G of whey of blood reduction in
their maintenance, more signifi cantly was registered
at heavy forms of a salmonellosis. The contents of
ribofl avin and pantotenic acids in whey of blood
of sick children during the sharp period of disease
was lower in comparison with those parameters
in children of the control group. Thus, probably,
insuffi ciency of studied vitamins had the major value
in occurrence of surveyed children with the weak
reaction of an organism in reply to introduction of
the bacterial agent. It was proved the dependence
between reductions in levels of ribofl avin and
pantotenic acids and parameters of immunity that
was especially visualized in children with heavy
forms of a salmonellosis. Retrospective analyses of total 27 preterm infants
were included in the study. Out of 27 neonates 12
(44%) died and 15(55%) survived categorized as
I and II groups. The I group infants of mean birth
weight 2640±480 grams with mean gestational
age 24±17 wks, and the II group of mean birth
weight 2710±410 grams with mean gestational
age 28±37 wks. There were differences between
maternal anamnesis such as: multiple pregnancy –
26% (I) and 9 % (II); preeclampsia – 26% (I) and
36% (II), placental abruption – 46% (I) and 27%
(II), cesarean section – 53% (I) and 45% (II). The
rate of maternal infection pathology and abnormal
fetal presentation were without differences in
both group. After birth severe asphyxia (0–3 by
Apgar) was in 60% neonates of the irst group,
and only in 9% neonates of the second one. The
character of clinical course was as following:
all patients had severe respiratory insuffi ciency,
clinic of brain edema was in 86% infants (I) and
36% (II). Post hypoxic intracranial hemorrhage
was diagnosed in 93% newborns (I ) and in 27%
newborns (II). The multiple pregnancy, placenta
abruption, severe asphyxia and intracranial
hemorrhage more frequently were in neonates
with respiratory disorders who had unfavorable
outcomes in our study and could be estimated as
death predictors.
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