Subject: Пожалуйста, посмотрите мой текст на наличие ошибок, я выкладываю его ещё раз, но теперь с учётом ваших исправлений и замечаний Пожалуйста, посмотрите мой текст на наличие ошибок, я выкладываю его ещё раз, но теперь с учётом ваших исправлений и замечаний и очень прошу вас ещё раз посмотреть мой текст, и если есть ошибки указать или исправить:Animal rights. Throughout the years, humans have been using animals as the source of food and for making fur and leather clothes. Animal fats are widely used in cosmetic industry in the manufacture of soap, shampoo, and some beauty products. Some jewelry producers use horns and tusks of certain animals as raw material. Animals are kept for people’s fun in zoos, circuses, safari parks, and as pets at homes. Animals are often killed for fun, for example, during hunting and safari. Many animals are used in the military industry for testing new weapons, space exploration is also not to forget as dogs, monkeys, and rodents are sent in space with electrical wires attached to their brains. Most drugs are tested on animals. Animals are used in vivisection - operations on living organisms. Many animals are bred specifically to contract a disease, so that the disease could be better understood and a potential method of treatment could be found. One of the fast-growing area of medicine is genetic manipulation on animals. Brothers Charles and Jay Vacanti hope the technique they are pioneering, growing an ear from human cells on the back of a genetically-engineered mouse, could be used to reconstruct ears lost in accidents or to give normal hearing to children born without ears. Nowadays, scientists are trying to grow human organs from human sells genetically engineered animals. With the technique the hope to reconstruct organs lost an accidents. Animals are used in teaching hospitals for research and learning activities. The experimental animals feel pain, suffer, go blind, and die prematurely. After the experiments are finished they are usually killed. Many species, such as tigers, lions, and some kinds of elephants, whales and many birds are on the verge of extinction. One of the reasons for this is the destruction of rain forests, which deprives animals of their natural habitat. People kill animals to decorate their homes with stuffed animals. Some animals caught in traps sometimes bite off their paws to get free. (this sentence is out of place here) There is a number of international movements and organizations with the mandate to protect animals. These people are animal rights activists. They oppose hunting, killing animals for fun, using animals in medical experiments, producing leather and fur clothes, and keeping animals in captivity. They hold meetings, demonstrations, and marches, write petitions and take their concerns to different courts. Sometimes they break into laboratories and take away animals. They demand to stop cutting down forests. Many celebrities join the ranks of the animal rights activists and raise their voices against earing leather and fur. For example, some top models refuse to take part in fashion shows that display fur collections. A few years ago some top models refused to attend the Miss World contest because the participants were wearing fur. Activists call to buy "cruelty-free" products which have never been tested on animals. On the one hand, I think that animals should have the same rights as people do. They should be able to live in a free and natural environment, but on the other hand, if we do not use animals in medical trials we will never completely understand all diseases. I like animals and that’s why I am against killing animals for fun. Заранее огромное спасибо!!!
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