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Subject: Помогите пжалуйста Здравствуйте, прошу Вашей помощи. Как правильно перевести этот кусочек?Тут точно много ошибок... Татьяна занимается музыкой с 7 лет. Профессионально поет на сцене с 16 лет. Сегодня это молодой перспективный российский проект «SEVER». Певица работает в стиле поп-рок Сама сочиняет стихи. Записано более 30 песен, на 2 из них сняты видеоклипы. Лауреат нескольких музыкальных клипов. Tatyana is engaged in music from 7 years. Professionally sings on a stage from 16 years. Today she is a young perspective Russian project "SEVER". The singer works in “pop-rock” style. She composes verses herself. She has registered more than 30 songs, on 2 from them were made videoclips. She is the winner of several musical contests. |
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Tatyana has taken interest in music since she was 7 year old. From 16 she started her professional singing carrier on stage. Today she is a young and forthcoming project "sever" (please note this sentence doesn’t make much sense). Her style is pop-rock. She also writs her own poems (poems might be a wrong word to use if you mean words for her songs) To date she has recorded over 30 songs, two of which were made into videos. She is a proud winner of a number of musical awards. (sorry added couple of words...couldn't help myself as text looks realy boring) |
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+ poems=lyrics By mow she has had more than 30 records and 2 videos |
| mow=now, sorry |
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As I said depence what you mean. With regards to the 30 songs sentense, I would leave my suggestion... as lesdn one changes the meaning a bit and "has had" looks a bit old fasion |
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