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 Elga86

link 5.10.2006 15:50 
Subject: He told he loved her; laughed; hummed to himself as she helped to wash his hair: everything he did was the same, but conviction sat in his chest like a stone.
He told he loved her; laughed; hummed to himself as she helped to wash his hair: everything he did was the same, but conviction sat in his chest like a stone.

Меня особо волнует, как адекватно перевести hummed to himself as she helped to wash his hair и but conviction sat in his chest like a stone

 ze anya

link 5.10.2006 15:54 
Он говорил, что любит ее, смеялся, мурлыкал, пока она помогала ему мыть голову - всё было как прежде, только чувство вины, застряв комком в горле, не оставляло его.

конечно же, ИМХО

 ze anya

link 5.10.2006 15:56 
чувство вины давило, словно камень

 

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