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 miami

link 6.09.2006 7:26 
Subject: Проверьте, пожалуйста
Посмотрите, пожалуйста, перевод отзыва, который должен хорошо звучать и не содержать каких-либо ошибок:

Исходник:
Компания успешно завершила работы по отделке Office and Canteen building общей площадью более 20.000м2. Контракт был заключен на условиях FIDIC.
Компания показала себя опытным подрядчиком, готовым к гибкому и профессиональному решению задач, возникающих в ходе стройки. Работа была выполнена с высоким качеством без задержки сроков.

Мой перевод:
Company have been working successfully to fit out the Office and Canteen building under FIDIC base contracts. Total area of the premises is over 20.000m2.
Company have proved to be a skilled contractor and to provide flexible and professional approach to tackling any problem occurring in the process of construction. The work was completed in due course with a high-quality standard.

 Анатолий Д

link 6.09.2006 7:32 
частично:

THE Company haS been/proved...
have been working -- значит все еще работает, а нужно "завершила"
THE total area...
skilled -> qualified/resourceful/experienced
tackling -> addressing
occurring -> arising
in due course -> on time
with a ... -> to a high standard of quality.

 Anna F

link 6.09.2006 7:39 
завершила работы - successfully completed
without delay/on time

 triplet

link 6.09.2006 7:43 
Как вар:
The Company has sucсessfully completed fitting-out of the Office and Canteen building occupying a total floor-space of 20.000 m2 under FIDIC terms and conditions.
Company have proved to be a qualified contractor capable of applying flexible and competent solutions to any challenges arising in the course of construction. The work was completed on time to to a high standard of workmanship.

 miami

link 6.09.2006 7:59 
большое вам спасибо за помощь

 Nina79

link 6.09.2006 8:10 
as an appetizer:

THE company HASbeen working successfully EQUIP the Office and Canteen building under FIDIC base contracts. THE total area of the premises is over 20.000m2.
THE company haS PROVEN ITSELF to be a skilled contractor providING A flexible and professional approach to tackling ANY UNEXPECTED CONSTRUCTION ISSUES. The work was completed in due course AND CONFORMED TO A HIGH QUALITY STANDARD.

 miami

link 6.09.2006 8:22 
thanks a lot

 

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