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[Nastique]

Проверьте плиз, абзац. Интересует грамматика в первую очередь, и насколько текст звучит по-английски. Спасибо. (Речь идет о процедуре скачивания файлов с сервера)

A temporary direct download link is generated each time you visit download page. This temporary direct link is assigned to a user IP address. With Download Manager you can:
- Split downloaded files into smaller sections and download each one simultaneously
- Resume broken downloads
- Increase download speed by up to 300 percent
Be informed that a direct link is valid during xx hours. When the time limit is expired or your IP address gets changed, you will not be able to use this link further. To continue the file download, you will need to visit a download file page and generate a new link. This is done to reduce the server load and unload the channel.

[Wass]

все хорошо - лишь чуток :)

A temporary direct download link is generated each time you visit a/the download page. This temporary direct link is assigned to a user IP address. With Download Manager you can:
- Split downloaded files into smaller sections and download each one simultaneously for simultaneous download
- Resume broken interrupted downloads
- Increase download speed by up to 300 percent
Be informed that a direct link is valid during xx hours. When the time limit is expired or your IP address gets changed, you will not be able to use this link further. To continue the file download, you will need to visit a download file page and generate a new link. This is done to reduce the server load and unload the channel.

сходите по сайтам менеджеров закачек для терминологии
http://www.getright.com/whatisit.html
http://pro.reget.com/

и иже с ними

[Nastique]

Ой, спасибо огромное. Та по сайтам этим ходила, но в нескольких местах все таки сомневалась.

[Wass]

все отлично - перефразируя кролика "и незачем так..."© волноваццо!