Исправление ошибок. Проверьте, пожалуйста. gram.

[mermaidblue]

Здравствуйте. Проверьте, пожалуйста, правильно ли исправила.

Do not forget to get a juice from the freezer.
Do not forget to get the juice from the freezer.

Nobody was absent. All members arrived.
Nobody was absent. All the members arrived.

We are opening a new supermarket. Supermarket is likely to bring good profit.
We are opening a new supermarket. The supermarket is likely to bring good profit.

Who is on this old picture?
Who is it on this old picture?

I feel a strong pain in right side.
I feel a strong pain in the right side.

Need I to go there if I will not have a chance to talk to him?
Need I to go there if I do not have a chance to talk to him?

I hate you speak like that!
I hate you to speak like that!

They communicate in big network.
They communicate in a big network.

The project being launched by our company is attractive.
The project launched by our company is attractive.

You must not wake up early. It is not necessary.
You do not have to wake up early. It is not necessary.

The tickets ordering are delivered.
The tickets ordered are delivered.

Enter a university is his dream.
Entering a university is his dream.

I see nothing terrible in dismissing if you have a good steady income apart from work.
I see nothing terrible in dismissal if you have a good steady income apart from work.

You did not need to prepare for the meeting. It was cancelled all the same.
You did not need prepare for the meeting. It was cancelled all the same.

Try to put this spice into the soup. The taste will be really exciting.
Try to put this spice into the soup. The taste will be really exciting.

[u210318]

The supermarket is likely to bring good profit. > a good profit

I feel a strong pain in the right side. > I feel strong pain

I hate you to speak like that! > speaking

The project being launched by our company is attractive. - Нет ошибок, такая фраза возможна.

Entering a university is his dream. > To enter (подлежащее-инфинитив)

I see nothing terrible in dismissal if you have a good steady income apart from work, It was cancelled all the same - забавный рунглиш.

Try putting.

[Wolverine]

1) 'a strong pain' is OK.
2) The question form of the 'modal need' is very uncommon. If you feel like using it anyway, it shall be treated as a modal verb.

Need I go there if I do not have a chance to talk to him?

In this case, I would prefer 'should'.
Also, 'Should/need I go there if I will not have a chance to talk to him?' sounds OK to me, too. I don't know why.

[Alex455]

must not и do not have - разве оба варианта не имеют права на существование? Здесь же просто разные смысловые оттенки.
pain без артикля, нас неправильно научили?

[metrobelarus]

Ой как здесь разогнаться можно.

Do not forget to get a juice from the freezer.
Do not forget to get the juice from the freezer.
*** В принципе исправлено правильно, хотя первое предложение имеет право на существование, если подразумевается "схватить ОДИН ИЗ пакетов/упаковок сока".

Nobody was absent. All members arrived.
Nobody was absent. All the members arrived.
*** +1

We are opening a new supermarket. Supermarket is likely to bring good profit.
We are opening a new supermarket. The supermarket is likely to bring good profit.
*** +1

Who is on this old picture?
Who is it on this old picture?
*** Здесь аж сама запуталась... Я бы, наверное, все-таки сказала "Who is THIS on this old picture", но это просто "personal preference" - я WHO c IT не люблю совмещать.

I feel a strong pain in right side.
I feel a strong pain in the right side.
*** I feel strong pain in the right side.

Need I to go there if I will not have a chance to talk to him?
Need I to go there if I do not have a chance to talk to him?
*** Need I go there if I would not have a chance to talk to him?

I hate you speak like that!
I hate you to speak like that!
*** I hate you speaking like that! / I hate when you are speaking like that!

They communicate in big network.
They communicate in a big network.
*** +1

The project being launched by our company is attractive.
The project launched by our company is attractive.
*** +1

You must not wake up early. It is not necessary.
You do not have to wake up early. It is not necessary.
*** +1 ну или 'do not need'

The tickets ordering are delivered.
The tickets ordered are delivered.
*** The tickets ordered are being delivered / have been delivered.

Enter a university is his dream.
Entering a university is his dream.
*** +1 хотя лексически по-моему это русское влияние, но грамматически исправлено правильно.

I see nothing terrible in dismissing if you have a good steady income apart from work.
I see nothing terrible in dismissal if you have a good steady income apart from work.
*** Чем дальше в лес, тем больше дров... но не меняя лексики - лучше варианта, чем у Вас, у меня нет, так что +1

You did not need to prepare for the meeting. It was cancelled all the same.
You did not need prepare for the meeting. It was cancelled all the same.
*** shouldn't have prepared????

Try to put this spice into the soup. The taste will be really exciting.
Try to put this spice into the soup. The taste will be really exciting.
*** Try putting...

[u210318]

Это, видимо, какая-то школьница.
Задание скорее всего было на перевод (рунглиш тому свидетельством, я выделил не все, туда же in a big network, да и launch), а артикли просто самое трудное.

[u210318]

Alex455, strong pain может быть и с неопределенным артиклем. Но без тут предпочтительнее, имеет более разговорное значение.

[натрикс]

А модальные глаголы товарищу заказчику повторить!

[APN]

metrobelarus I hate when you are speaking like that! > I hate it when you are speaking like that!

[APN]

mermaidblue Entering a university is his dream. Многие говорят, что инфинитив и герундий взаимозаменяемы в функции подлежащего. Более того, говорят, что герундий в роли подлежащего употребляется чаще, чем инфинитив. Из этой предпосылки делается вывод, что герундий больше подходит для роли подлежащего. Изъян этого суждения заключается в том, что герундий гораздо ближе к существительному, чем инфинитив. Этим объясняется его частотность в функции подлежащего. Инфинитив же - глагольная форма, и ему присуща категория временной относительности, которая сообщает ему значение "будущего" по отношению к точке на "линии времени", которая является фокусом сказуемого. Поскольку мы говорим здесь о мечте, мы имеем в виду то самое значение, которое присуще инфинитиву. Следовательно, начать предложение с инфинитива to enter здесь можно, но такая конструкция менее употребительна, чем конструкция с начальным "формальным" подлежащим "it". Стало быть, лучший вариант будет "It is his dream to enter a university." "To enter a university" можно заменить на "to go to university" или "to get into (a) university".

[u210318]

APN, правильно, но слишком сложно для школьника. Лучше так: entering - процесс, а to enter - результат, именно в сочетании со словом "мечта" в данном случае сочетается только второе. По-русски то же: мечта - не "поступление", а "поступить".

[metrobelarus]

APN, both forms are acceptable. I prefer the one without 'it'.