предложения с рус. (новости рынка недвижимости) gen.

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Устойчивый рост активности рынка жилья наблюдается с начала года: в январе проведено 3 500 сделок, в июле - 4978 сделки с жильем.

The housing market has been on a continued upswing since the start of the year: there were 3,500 housing deals in January and 4,978 in July.

Рост активности на рынке жилья связан с реализацией программ, направленных на улучшение качества жизни населения, и способствует увеличению объемов жилищного строительства.

The upswing on the housing market is partly due to the implementation of quality of life improvement programs and boosts residential construction.

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The stable growth of activity in the housing market is being observed since the start of the year: 3,500 deals made in January and 4,978 in July.

The upswing in the housing market is due to the implementation of programs oriented to improve the quality of people's life and fosters the increase of residential construction volume.

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