с английским на "вы", помогите перевести, пожалуйств.

[5678]

Цель работы - определение важнейших демотивационных факторов, влияющих на снижение лояльности высококвалифицированного персонала в современных российских организациях, и разработке рекомендаций по совершенствованию системы мотивации с учетом этих факторов.

правильно так?
The aim of the thesis/issue is to define the major demotivation factors that have an influence on the decrement of the highly skilled personnel in modern Russian organizations and to work out the recommendations on improvement of motivation system taking into account these factors.

[felog]

Option:
The purpose of this article/paper/study/survey/work (whatever) is to identify the critical/major/principal demotivating factors impairing the loaylty of highly quailified personnel employed by Russian companies/firms/businesses and to develop/devise/outline/work out guidelines/recommendations to improve the motivation plan/scheme/system based on/by reference to those factors.

[123:]

система мотивации = incentive program

An incentive program is a formal scheme used to promote or encourage specific actions or behavior by a specific group of people during a defined period of time. Incentive programs are particularly used in business management to motivate employees, and in sales in order to attract and retain customers.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Incentive_program

[5678]

felog & 123:, спасибо!

[felog]

incentive - полностью согласен, запамятовал что-то)