Помогите, пожалуйста...

[Dianka]

Друзья, у меня такая просьба: помогите поделить этот кусок на предложения, т.е. где здесь можно поставить точки? А то так я вообще не могу въехать в текст! Переводить ничего не надо...

Important factors that could cause actual results to differ from these forward-looking statements include the potential that the final test program and commercial installations of the HTL technology will experience technological and mechanical problems or delays in receiving equipment and services from suppliers, Ivanhoe Energy’s process to upgrade bitumen and heavy oil may not be commercially viable, assumptions applied in drawing the conclusions in the comparative cost analyses may be materially different from future market conditions, including the assumptions made around Ivanhoe Energy’s anticipated capital and operating costs for and HTL facility, environmental regulation could change resulting in design changes or increased capital and operating costs, our ability to raise capital as and when required to complete a commercial HTL facility, competition from emerging technologies and other risks disclosed in Ivanhoe Energy’s Annual Report on Form 10-K filed with the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission on EDGAR and the Canadian Securities Commissions on SEDAR.

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Important factors, that could cause actual results to differ from these forward-looking statements, include the potential that the final test program and commercial installations of the HTL technology will experience technological and mechanical problems, or delays in receiving equipment and services from suppliers.
Ivanhoe Energy’s process to upgrade bitumen and heavy oil may not be commercially viable.
Assumptions applied in drawing the conclusions in the comparative cost analyses may be materially different from future market conditions, including the assumptions made around Ivanhoe Energy’s anticipated capital and operating costs for and HTL facility.
Environmental regulation could change resulting in design changes or increased capital and operating costs, our ability to raise capital as and when required to complete a commercial HTL facility, competition from emerging technologies and other risks disclosed in Ivanhoe Energy’s Annual Report on Form 10-K filed with the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission on EDGAR and the Canadian Securities Commissions on SEDAR

[Dianka]

Спасибо! Вы тоже считаете, что and здесь лишнее:

... including the assumptions made around Ivanhoe Energy’s anticipated capital and operating costs for and HTL facility ?

А как насчет этого, тут не может быть опечатки: ...our ability to raise capital as and when required to complete a commercial HTL facility...?

[123:]

as and when required - обычная красивость, фигура речи, как переводить еще не придумал, но полагаю, что это не опечатка.....

[123:]

anticipated capital and operating costs for an HTL facility

[sledopyt]

можно представить в таком формате:

Important factors that could cause actual results to differ from these forward-looking statements include (the following):
- The potential that the final test program and commercial installations of the HTL technology will experience technological and mechanical problems or delays in receiving equipment and services from suppliers.
- Ivanhoe Energy’s process to upgrade bitumen and heavy oil may not be commercially viable.
- Assumptions applied in drawing the conclusions in the comparative cost analyses may be materially different from future market conditions, including the assumptions made around Ivanhoe Energy’s anticipated capital and operating costs for and HTL facility.
- Environmental regulation could change resulting in design changes or increased capital and operating costs.
- Our ability to raise capital as (required) and when required to complete a commercial HTL facility.
- Competition from emerging technologies and other risks disclosed in Ivanhoe Energy’s Annual Report on Form 10-K filed with the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission on EDGAR and the Canadian Securities Commissions on SEDAR.

[123:]

Ну, да... тока and надо исправить на an...
Assumptions applied in drawing the conclusions in the comparative cost analyses may be materially different from future market conditions, including the assumptions made around Ivanhoe Energy’s anticipated capital and operating costs for and HTL facility.