Помогите пожалуйста с переводом!!!

[ShiryakSV]

Помогите, пожалуйста, перевести одну фразу: "Walk in beauty". Понимаю, что любой переводчик переведет как: "Прогулка в красоте". Но она должна означать нечто иное. Дело в том, что эта фраза ставится в конце письма (по крайней мере я так видел), как напутствие чтоли, или пожелание. Но я думаю никак не утверждение. Как можно понять эту фразу? Как перевести правильно?

[d.]

Lord Byron

CLXXIII. "She walks in beauty, like the night"

SHE walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies,
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meets in her aspect and her eyes;
Thus mellow'd to that tender light 5
Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.

One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress
Or softly lightens o'er her face, 10
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.

And on that cheek and o'er that brow
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow, 15
But tell of days in goodness spent,—
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent.

[Юрий Гомон]

"Прогулка в красоте"? Ну это Вы зря про нас так.

[ShiryakSV]

To Юрий

Извините, я не правильно выразился! :) Я имел в виду он-лайн переводчики и программы. Я пытался переводить в разных он-лайн переводчиках, но везде одно и то же.

Извиняюсь, если что не так сказал (забыл уточнить).

[~hobo]

When my Lakota (a.k.a Sioux) friends and I say our good-bye, whether on the phone or in person, we part with the comment, “Walk in Beauty.”

“Walk in Beauty” means—“Beauty before me, beauty behind me, beauty beside me, beauty below me, beauty above me — I walk in beauty."

Walking in Beauty is walking in—Joy, Bliss and Safety. It permeates our physical, emotional, mental and spiritual bodies.

In Incan shamanism, the South direction of the Medicine Wheel contains four practices. These are non-attachment, non-suffering, non-judgment and beauty. Pondering this for a moment, you can understand that if we practice non-attachment, non-suffering and non-judgment, we will arrive at a space where we can walk in beauty.

“Walking in Beauty” is more than a feeling or emotion. It is a state of being that can best be described as grace. In this state of grace called beauty, we accept that everything is—neither good nor bad, and we live in a universe that exists on our behalf.

In examining the other three practices of the South in depth and examine our lives honestly, we realize that our attachments often lead to a great deal of unhappiness. There are many such attachments—to people, careers, money, romantic love, outcomes, possessions, religious practices, keeping up with the neighbors—the list is endless.

All attachments, at some point, inevitably lead us to an awareness, which prompts us to refuse or are unable to accept what is. Non-acceptance eventually leads to pain and suffering, and we fall from grace and forget we are surrounded by beauty. By practicing non-attachment, we eliminate the source of the majority of our suffering. In this life, pain is inevitable—suffering is optional. The key to practicing non-suffering is to stay in the moment, stay in our “Beauty.”

To help you to “Walk in Beauty,” ask yourself these questions.

• What beliefs do I need to reevaluate/change?

• Who in my past does this person/situation remind me?

• What about this person annoys me?

• What does this person do that I don’t like about myself?

• What do I need to change to change my experience?

• What are his/her motivations?

• What are my motives?

• What are my choices?

While the majority of our suffering comes from regret, remorse and guilt about the past or fear of possible future pain, judgment also plays a part. It is astonishing how much time and energy we spend on judging. Not just judging others, but judging what is good and bad about our own lives, and the world around us from our limited perspectives. Our judgments are all based on comparisons made with past pain or pleasure.

Our suffering and judgments not only keep us from the grace of beauty, but they keep us locked in time. When we are locked in linear time, we cannot experience our divinity. One of the greatest joys of walking in beauty is the consistent experience of our own divinity.

So, as we part, my friend(s) and I are reminding each other to stay consistently connected to our own divinity.

Dorothy M. Neddermeyer, PhD, author, motivational speaker, and inspirational leader specializes in: Mind, Body, Spirit healing and Physical/Sexual Abuse Prevention and Recovery. Dr. Neddermeyer empowers people to view life's challenges as an opportunity for Personal/Professional Growth and Spiritual Awakening. http://www.drdorothy.net

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[Нина К]

Мысли вслух.

Ежели в качестве напутствия, то "Пребывай в красоте" или "Пребывай в прекрасном"? Поскольку здесь walk - жизненный путь, движение по жизни, то может быть, передать не глаголом движения, а "глаголом бытия"?

[ShiryakSV]

Большое спасибо за разъяснения! Теперь все понял :)

[Igor Kravchenko-Berezhnoy]

Верша свой путь в красе, как ночь
Небес в звездах, в краю без туч,
Она...................................

[YelenaPestereva]

Она идет во всей красе
Светла, как ночь ее страны.
Вся глубь небес и звезды все
В ее очах заключены,
Как солнце в утренней росе,
Но только мраком смягчены.

[User_name_value]

Красотка вошедшая с улицы

[Eric Olkha]

User_name__value 14.08.2009 1:00 link
Красотка вошедшая с улицы
+1
красотка, явившаяся без предварительного назначения
по аналогии с "walk ins are welcome - no appointment necessary!" ;o)

[User_name_value]

Да, но тока подозреваю, што байрон не имел ввиду закусочную, а там walk's а не walk, как в оригинальном сообщении. просто я сначала написал, как всегда, а потом почитал :)