Резюме на английском, прошу проверить

[Juverna]

Составила свое первое резюме на английском. Откорректируйте плиз, ежели что не так!

Personal Information:
Date of birth: August 17, 1987
Family status: Married

Education: Higher
2004-2008 Russian International Tourism Academy, “Organization Management” specialization

Work experience:
September 2008 - February 2009
Sales executive
Major Cargo Service (3PL Logistics Operator)
- Searching for new customers, setting up relationships
- Preparing prices and quotation
- Visiting exhibitions
- Cooperation with customer service department

January 2008 - June 2008
Senior sales executive
Lanier Service (Packaged supply of computer equipment)
- Training sales executives
- Current planning
- Preparing sales and revenue reports
- Support the sales process on large projects

July 2006 - January 2008
Sales executive
Lanier Service (Packaged supply of computer equipment)
- Searching for new customers, setting up relationships
- Preparing prices and quotation
- Delivery control
- Preparing documentation

March 2006 - July 2006
Selling Assistant
Adidas Group

September 2005 - March 2006
PC operator
Pony Express

Languages:
English: intermediate level (business intermediate courses in process)

Additional skills:
PC experienced user (MS Office - Excel, Word, Power Point, Outlook)
Driver's licence, private car
Excellent communication and presentation skills
Do not smoke
Hobbies: travelling, snowboarding, photography, cars, literature

References upon request

[Pereklada4]

Family status- marital status)

[Juverna]

Pereklada4: спасибо ))

[Pereklada4]

to search better than searching, лучше использовать инфинитив вместо герундия в списке того что вы делали)

[wonderboy2]

Family status=matital status -100%

[Pereklada4]

Wonderboy2
но чаще используют второй вариант))

[wonderboy2]

just consider:
Personal Information:
Date of birth: August 17, 1987
Marital status: Married

Education: Higher
Russian International Tourism Academy, 2004-2008
Area of specialty: Organization Management

Work experience:
September 2008 - February 2009
Sales Executive
Major Cargo Service (3PL Logistics Operator)
- Building a customer base and setting up relationships
- Pricing and quoting
- Making visits to exhibitions
- Liaising with the Customer Service Department

January 2008 - June 2008
Senior Sales Executive
Lanier Service (Packaged supply of computer equipment)
- Training Sales Executives
- Day-to-day planning
- Preparing sales and revenue reports
- Facilitating the sales process in major projects

July 2006 - January 2008
Sales executive
Lanier Service (Packaged supply of computer equipment)
- Building a customer base and setting up relationships
- Pricing and quoting
- Delivery control
- Doing paperwork

March 2006 - July 2006
Selling Assistant
Adidas Group

September 2005 - March 2006
PC operator
Pony Express

Languages:
English: intermediate level (business intermediate courses in pgross)

Additional skills:
PC experienced user (MS Office - Excel, Word, Power Point, Outlook)
Driver's license, own vehicle
Excellent communication and presentation skills
Do not smoke
Hobbies: travelling, snowboarding, photographing, cars, literature

References available upon request

[sledopyt]

Juverna, if you are sending this résumé to a Western company, consider a few suggestions:

1) There's no need to provide too much personal information, such as DOB or marital status, let alone whether or not you are a smoker (unless they specifically indicate the need for this information). In the Personal Info section I would only mention your contact info (mailing address, email, telephone)
2) после названий организаций и учебных заведений принято указывать месторасположение (город, страна)
3) The list of responsibilities in the Work Experience section is normally written using verbs in the Past tense (use action verbs, such as "managed", "coordinated", "created". For example "Participated in exhibitions" (vs. "visited exhibitions", etc.):
- SearchED for new customers and set up working relationships
- PreparED prices and quotation and negotiated agreements
- Participated in exhibitions
- Coordinated sales activities with Customer Service department

- Prepared and delivered training for Sales Executives (что Вы называете Sales Executives, кстати?)
- Performed planning activities
- Prepared sales and revenue reports
- Provided sales analytical support for large projects
4) "Education : Higher" - не катит! Higher than what? Укажите специальность и степень полученную Вами после окончания вуза.
5) USE THE WEB TO LOOK FOR IDEAS AND SEE THE WAY RESUMES ARE WRITTEN IN ENGLISH.

[Сomandor]

Objective: Название должности на которую претендуете (это
ставится в самом начале резюме)

Work experience: Work status
Name of company, address
Duties:

Additional Skills: Certified (name of program), month, year
Trained (name of program), month, year

Education: Graduated (name of school), month, year
Courses taken included: management, technology...etc

P.S. Don't forget about Cover Letter.