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[LiliO]

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According to Jan, currently the Comission requires the SC conclusion that the Company was not required to receive the SC approval for its indirect acquisition of stake in Holding Co. Under applicable legislation the official application review period for obtaining the SC conclusion is 30 calendar days. The law does not contain an exact list of documents to be provided to the SC in order to receive the SC Conclusion. However, we assume that the documents may be quite similar to those that have been already submitted to the SC in order to receive its approval for the Transaction. However, SC has a right to request any additional documents. Taking into consideration that the SC has already analysed the documents while the considering the application for acquisition of 19% of CIA we believe that the term for consideration may be shortened.

[sledopyt]

According to Jan, currently the Comission NOW requires the SC conclusion (DECISION?) that the Company was not required to receive OBTAIN the SC approval for its indirect acquisition of stake in Holding Co. Under applicable legislation, the official application review period for obtaining the SC conclusion (DECISION?) is 30 calendar days. The law does not contain SPECIFY an THE exact list of documents to be provided to the SC in order to receive the SC Conclusion. However, we assume that the documents may be quite similar to those that have been already submitted to the SC in order to receive FOR its approval for OF the Transaction. However, SC has a THE right to request any additional documents. Taking into consideration ACCOUNT that the SC has already analysed REVIEWED? the documents while theY considerEDing the application for THE acquisition of 19% of CIA, we believe that the term TIME for consideration DOCUMENTS REVIEW? may be shortened. (or IT SHOULD NOT TAKE LONG FOR THEM TO REVIEW THE (ADDITIONAL) DOCUMENTS)