какой вариант лучше, перевод с РУС

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тут перевожу шкалу оценки работы Работника. она в виде таблицы. вот в таблице как лучше перевести с РУС на англ. ОБяз-но придерживаться грам-ке?

Работник показал отличные результаты работы, цели достигнуты, задачи выполнены досрочно и с высоким качеством. Перевыполнение плана (поручений, работ)

1 Employee showed excellent results of work, goals were achieved, tasks were executed in advance and with high quality. The over-fulfillment of plan (instruction, works).

2 Employee showed excellent results of work, goals achieved, tasks executed in advance and with high quality. The over-fulfillment of plan (instruction, works).

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consider:
1. The Employee has showed excellent performance, achieving/attaining goals set were achieved, fulfilling tasks ahead of schedule and with a high degree/measure of efficiency. Superior performance of the target (instructions, duties).