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Subject: корректно ли звучит? Гляньте, пожалуйста, на этот абзац и скажите, что здесь не так... Спасибо!Recently we have sent you a letter telling about our new projects. We would like to inform you that from now on you can download our video materials at www. (адрес сайта) |
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We would like to inform you that from now on you can download our video materials at Тяжкое предложение получилось... We would like to inform that you can download our video materials at Так легче? |
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link 6.11.2007 12:16 |
| "letter telling about our new" imho "telling" - лишнее |
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2 Godzilla: "inform" usually requires a subject. 2 iryna.ma: Present Perfect and "recently" usually do not sit together well. I recommend either getting rid of "recently" or the "have" construct. Here is my suggestion: Recently we sent you a letter introducing our new projects. Now you can also download out video materials from www. (адрес сайта). |
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2 ms801 [painfully breathing] That's not a mother tongue for us... |
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