Subject: to address a request busin. Проверьте, пожалуйста, нормально ли звучат эти две фразы:Upon the recommendation of A.Ivanov we are addressing to you our request to participate in the concert. We are looking forward to hear about your decision regarding our invitation in the nearest future. |
just consider: [Acting] on A.Ivanov's advice we are extending this invitation to you our to participate in the concert/or we hereby request the honor of your participation in the concert. We look forward to hearing from u regarding our invitation at your earliest convenience. |
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link 28.09.2007 4:58 |
сомнения лезут в голову поп поводу второго предложения.... там не we are looking forward to hearING???? в башке крутится шаблонная фраза looking forward to hearing from you... или инфинитив тож сойдет? утром думаеццо плохо... |
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link 28.09.2007 5:01 |
все. вижу)) |
сорри: в первом предложении * our* - лишнее. |
всем спасибо! |
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