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[1979Alena]

в том числе получены все необходимые корпоративные и иные согласования и одобрения, не нарушены права третьи лиц, в частности, преимущественное право акционеров Общества и самого общества приобрести Акции

including all necessary corporate and other consents and approvals obtained, the rights of the third parties were not infringed, in particular priority right of Company’s shareholders and Company to purchase shares

Спасибо

[city girl]

including obtaining any necessary corporate consents and approvals or any other such consents and approvals as may required, keeping intact third-party rights, in particular with respect to the right of first refusal of the Company and its shareholders

[Irina Primakova]

Without seeing the first part of the sentence and not knowing what the subject of the sentence was...:

including the following: all the necessary corporate and other agreements and approvals are obtained; the rights of the third parties are free from infringement, in particular there is no infringement of the priority right of the Company’s shareholders as well as the Company itself to purchase shares

You can try to periphrase and use active instead of passive verbs. Active verbs are much more organic for English.

[Irina Primakova]

Without seeing the first part of the sentence and not knowing what the subject of the sentence was...:

including the following: all the necessary corporate and other agreements and approvals are obtained; the rights of the third parties are free from infringement, in particular there is no infringement of the priority right of the Company’s shareholders as well as the Company itself to purchase shares

You should try to periphrase and use active verbs instead of passive verbs. Active verbs are much more organic for English.

[Alex16]

including the pre-emptive right of the Company's shareholders and the Company itself to acquire the Shares