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Subject: Помогите, очень срочно: биография юного дарования Ребята, нужно срочно проверить (перевод не мой, я с налету проверила, теперь дальше строчу тааакую поэтичечкую красоту, что нимагу)Nikita was born in the south of Russia in 1985.He began studying violin at the age of 6. In 2005, when he was only 19, he graduated from the Tchaikovsky Conservatory in Moscow under prof. Edward Grach. |
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**studying violin** (Ru English)- started to learn playing the violin/attending violin classes **went on tour with concerts in** - went on concert tours around/over **in the Great Hall** - at - IMO **recordings on CD** - CD recordings **for TV-channel “Culture”** - TV-channel [shot] footages |
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This should look better to you: Nikita was born in the south of Russia in 1985 and began his studies of the violin at the age of 6. In 2005, when he was only 19, he graduated from the Tchaikovsky Conservatory in Moscow where he had studied under the guidance of Professor Edward Grach. He has played with the Rostov Symphony Orchestra, Moscovia Chamber Orchestra, Petrozavodsk Symphony, Moscow Academic Symphony, State Symphony Orchestra of Russia, St. Petersburg’s Capella Orchestra, National Orchestra of Ukraine, NDR Symphony Orchestra (Hannover), Haifa Symphony Orchestra with Conductors Edward Grach, Yoel Levi, Christoph Poppen, Volodymir Sirenko, Aleksander Sladkovsky,Vladimir Ziva, Alexander Slutsky and others. He has won a number of competitions including, Assembly of Arts, Moscow (1999), New Names competition, Moscow (2000), Yampolskiy International Violin Competition, 3-rd prixe, Penza, Russia (2002), International Violin Competition in Kloster-Shontal, 1-st prize as well as, a special prize for the Bach sonata, Germany (2003), Joachim International Violin Competition, Hannover, Germany (2006), Oistrach International Violin Competition, 1-st prize, Moscow (2007). Nikita has also participated in the Oleg Kagan Music Festival (2000), the Academy of Russia Festival of Modern Music (2004- 2005), the Keshet Eilon Mastercourses (2002-2005). He later began playing as a soloist for the State Moscow Philharmonic Society in 2005. Nikita has gone on tour in Norway, Hungary, Israel, Germany, Italy, Ukraine, Egypt, China and Moldova. He regularly plays the Great and Small Halls of the Moscow Conservatory, the Tchaikovsky Concert Hall as well as, a number of other concert halls in Russia. He has released CDs and has recorded for the television station Culture. |
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under Professor Eduard [sic] Grach participated --> better 'took part' or 'performed at' Nikita went on tour with concerts in - better 'Nikita toured in Norway, Hungary... ' constantly plays --> regularly performs other concert halls --> other venues 'He recorded a number of CDs...' или 'He recorded a CD...' (проверьте в гугле) 'and appeared on TV' imho |
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спасибо огромное, помогите еще (никогда не была такой беспомощной, ой) "высокая культура исполнительского мастерства, абсолютное владение всей палитрой звукового тембра и наисложнейших технических приемов" |
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Shumov participated --> 'performed at'+++ Nikita went on tour with concerts in - better 'Nikita toured in Norway, Hungary... ' + constantly plays --> regularly performs + other concert halls --> other venues +++ |
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link 30.03.2007 9:51 |
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A few dollars more ... :-) Nikita took up the violin at the age of six. (studies of the violin is smth else entirely. Honest. ) Nikita toured (no preposition here) Norway, etc. |
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link 30.03.2007 9:52 |
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Вдогонку Kultura (Culture) TV channel |
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Nikita took up the violin at the age of six. (studies of the violin is smth else entirely. Honest. ) ++++ but we dont actually have the original so since they used the verb study i assumed there was a reason. who knows. but judging from the text, you most likely right |
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Nina, what on earth all these +++ suppose to mean? ______________________________ Маджести (та самая) контекст пришлось придумать самому)) [He is] an outstanding musician with virtuoso technique and absolute confidence across the entire range of the violin compass. (imho) |
| it means, yes or yes yes yes. it means i agree with you and think your version should be used |
| Hmm... I see. Well, thank you!)) |
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ой, слиха, мало было контекста... спаибо еще раз всем огромное перевела дальше все сама, вроде понравилось (и на дом дали - в назидание, значит:-)) кстати, ни один из предложенных вами вариантов одобрен не был...:( |
| то-есть, study осталось, и много чего еще... |
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ха-ха, а судьи кто? ой вей |
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кстати, ни один из предложенных вами вариантов одобрен не был...:( how can that be? where do you work? |
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Susan, I took your variant + Shumov. Don't frown. :) |
| i read something wrong. i thought you meant they didnt like any of them. long day. sorry |
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Там потом нашли нестыковки с русским текстом, и нестыковки в русском тексе, перепутанные даты и др. так что соответственно пришлось исправлять, не без помощи шефа, чьим, собственно, отпрыском является дарование. Ух, досталось аффтарам! Потому-то и одобрен не был. |
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